Veil Verse – Cultivating Chaos & Asgard Awakening

Book: Veil Verse!

Cultivating Chaos & Asgard Awakening
Authors: Blaise Corvin & William D. Arand

Spoilers most likely!
This review is a bit different. This review is on a universe made by two awesome indie writers which the main characters (or MCS) may or may not cross but who knows?
That’s part of the fun! Now, let us start reviewing the books individually, shall we!
Cultivating Chaos is a cultivation novel that’s first person. The book barely has any grammar issues I saw, and how Arand writes his works it’s easy to read, fun to enjoy it doesn’t give you any complicated terminology and engages you almost immediately.
Now for those of you who have read cultivation novels… the MC Ash is not your typical Cultivator, he doesn’t think like one at all. While he loves martial arts he disdains having to talk a lot of crap, or talking all mystical like he’s way more of a laid back mc which why he’s awesome. It takes the tropes of Chinese cultivation novels and makes them more bearable, fun and engaging.

If hungry for a good wuxia that doesn’t have a lot of filler this is for you!
Asgard Awakening is about a man who becomes a slave, escapes slavery and slowly becomes a god. This MC is Trav who went through a lot since transported to the veil verse.

Warning it’s not a wuxia so don’t expect Trav to be jumping realms or anything he still has to find his own path to power. The title kinda spoilers part of it so I’ll leave it to your imagination.
The grammar good! It’s first person as well and easy to read there’s a lot more introspection in this novel then Cultivation Chaos about Trav and how everything he survives changes him.
Now all together there are already links to both worlds of each Main character that I think going to make this universe great.
The start of both books drags you in, engages you with the side characters half of them known as kin, beast people pretty much and with their different…culture it’s an interesting cultural difference. There’s more hidden but I’ll leave that to the readers I give this series a must read approval! Buy worthy!

It sets the foundation for a mass universe and I cannot wait for more!

I give both novels an 8/10!

Both books can be found here.

Ebook Review – Party Hard

I received this book for free in return for an honest review.

Party Hard by David Petrie an interesting book. It has some good quips, some snappy dialogue, and even some good fights. It just felt like it was missing something, almost like it was trying too hard. I will say that the concept and execution behind the quest that picks up our intrepid heroes is much more interesting and plausible than the usual “A whole bunch of people are suddenly trapped in a VRMMO game.”

There are three distinct sections to this book, and I think that each needs to be talked about individually: the introduction, the party gathering, and the quest itself, which was kind of a boss run/multiple dungeon run. I found the introduction fairly boring, other than the fight. I admit it was a pretty good way to show off both the main character’s skills, as well as a few of their limitations, but other than the fight it was mostly a 50-page infodump.

I think I enjoyed the party gathering stage the best. We got to head to a few different locations in the world and learn about them, as well as see the party dynamic slowly change as new characters kept being added. How they arrived was even altered so that there wasn’t the too much repetition. I think the thing that bothered me the most here was something small that I noticed throughout, the lack of commas when using multiple adjectives to describe a single object (i.e., the small, brown dog). Like I said, not a big thing, but when I noticed that quite a few in a row didn’t have it, only for the next one to, it annoyed me. I honestly would have been less upset if none of the adjectives had the commas, but when I see that a few of them do, it makes me think ‘why can’t the rest of them?!’ Other than that, the grammar was quite solid though.

Really the place where the story started showing signs of breaking down was in the actual quest portion. In order to prevent a disaster, the main characters had to go around and fight 4 mythologically themed bosses that were specially added to the game for this quest, all of which were going to be insanely hard. But several problems happened here. For one, the fact that there was four lead to an increasingly short screen time for the lead-up and fight of said bosses, as well as the fact that the names they were given really had very little to do with what the bosses were. It was more like “here are 4 bosses that I want you to fight, oh let’s give them a name to make sure they have a theme.” There was one fight even, that was solved by literal deus ex machina from outside the game. Sure, the hint was given in game for some “thing” the antagonist gave the party’s sponsor a while back, but that could have easily been a puzzle, not a boss. Admittedly, after I got over my annoyance at the whole mythology thing, the first boss fight was quite good. Even the third one was decent. Just… again, I would have been ok with the quest giving some reason why the mythology didn’t match up, or mutated, but without explanation, I guess it just felt hollow. Not that I don’t understand the reason for it lacking an explanation.

Now I couldn’t really connect with the characters, so maybe you’ll feel differently if you do. I don’t want to say that this is a bad book, there are definitely some good points to it, and I think that for some people, this will be great. Not for me though. The amount of fun I had with it was overshadowed by the overly joking nature (there are some serious moment, so it’s not even like there’s anything I can specifically point to and say ‘that’s what I mean by it seems to be trying too hard,’ that’s just how I felt about it) and the unsatisfying boss fights. 6/10

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Ebook Review – First Song

First Song, Book One (Anthem of Infinity 1)

Wow, just wow. I’ll start off by saying that First Song is my first non-video game related GameLit novel. I was not disappointed by any means. I’ll also try not to give away any unnecessary spoilers because the surprise is what really hooked me into this book.

I will agree with others that the first 25% of the book was tough to read. The main character, Noah, is difficult to sympathize with. He’s portrayed as a really weak, self-deprecating you adult. He doesn’t speak up and allows others to make choices for him. Again, it’s hard to trod through but if you can make it to that 25% mark, you are in for a treat.

At 25% is where the book takes off into fifth gear. I was completely surprised and taken unaware by the shift of perspective. My one hint, reread the book’s blurb. In hindsight, the author brazenly foreshadows the plot twist. That’s all for spoilers. The book is well written and the pacing, post-25%, makes it worth the read.

With book two of Anthem of Infinity, my hope and expectation are more exposure to the Aelves and The Voice. Make it through that first 25%. To quote a fallen movie star, “Just do it!”

Ebook Review – Radioactive Evolution

Radioactive Evolution by Richard Hummel – Review


Review 1

What happens when the Road Warrior gets a pet dragon?  Let’s find out…

Jared is alone and living in the base of a ruined Statue of Liberty in post-apocalyptic New York City.  Like all remaining people on the ground, his body contains nanites that allow him to stay alive amongst the radiation.  Since his nanites need periodic boosting, he scavenges around NYC to find nanite boosters, guns, ammunition, etc.  While exploring a subway station/tunnel, Jared hits the jackpot and comes across a rock that produces an electric shock, takes it for later study and turns out to be a dragon egg.  Hey, the world has dragons. Who knew?   Well, that’s part of the story.

In short order, his dragon companion Scarlet is born; it turns out that by “bonding” to Scarlet through nanites, Jared can essentially level up and pick up “magical” skills through killing mutated creatures.  Also, Jared gets a quest from Scarlet’s mother to protect the remaining dragons that have been in hiding for thousands of years. Thus, Jared and Scarlet start their adventure to find and defend the new dragons and grow themselves stronger.  There is also a subplot about getting back at the rich folk that live in cities that float in the sky and the water, they are somewhat responsible for the awful conditions on the ground apparently, but that’s only touched on as motivation to push the story along.

The combination of post-apocalyptic survival and dragon story is an interesting fusion of those two sub-genres and is woven together in a way that feels surprisingly logical.  I also give the author credit for introducing a gamelit/RPG system based on nanites and the dragon’s ability to contextualize the nanite’s powers for Jared.  While the justification for this mechanic is not made clear in the book, it wasn’t hard to just go with it.

Jared and Scarlet are solid main characters, and their dialogue is sometimes informative, sometimes funny, and sometimes sickly sweet.  While the mechanic to “bond” the two is artificial through nanites, they seem to take to each other awfully quickly.  I would have appreciated a bit more focus on why and how they get close.  Jared appears to be a capable scavenger with a strong moral center and a good amount of banter centers on Scarlet’s eating habits and Jared’s morality.

The middle of the story tends to drag somewhat, which to be fair often happens in stories like this where the main character will often spend time grinding to get stronger or, in this case, gets into many monster fights that are well done but aren’t interesting enough to warrant that much attention.  The ending has some interesting twists and turns, but as this is clearly part of a much larger story arc, the ending feels abrupt.  On the positive side, I do look forward to completing this story in future instalments.

I think that readers interested in the bleakness of survival stories and those interested in the wonders of dragon stories will enjoy this author’s initial effort.


Review 2 –

Not crunchy, just delicious! This is the counter to Harem gamelit-a story wholesome enough I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend to younger or more romantically adverse readers. The game elements are integrated into this fun, post-post-apocalyptic world. Levelling is fun, more organic than system notifications, which makes it very immersive. The effort he put in to make this book shine is clear, and it makes reading so enjoyable! Definitely, an author to watch! 5/5 stars

Ebook Review – Succubus 5

Review: Succubus 5 – Hardcore Dungeon Core, by A. J. Markam


Can a man love a crystal?  Let’s find out….

Ian’s succubus is “dead”.  Nope.  It turns out that she was transferred to a dungeon core and Ian and Alaria both want her back as a succubus.  Ian finds the dungeon’s cave and quickly finds a starter dungeon fairy, Wylla, and the crystal Alaria is stuck in.   Shortly we find out that Alaria’s soul was transferred to a dungeon core in the operation that Soraiya was trying to perform at the end of book 4. Luckily Ian can communicate with the dungeon core if he is touching it.  Ian brings her and the crystal she’s stuck in out of the cave and Alaria mentions that she had an old master named Deek that was a dungeon core and he might be able to help, so they set off to find Deek in the city of Vos.

Ian has to deal with more bounty hunters and gets involved in some court intrigue between church, state and guild that want to control the local Dungeon, Deek.  How this all resolves itself was even more fun than I expected.  Obviously, Ian gets to have a ton of sex and battles throughout, which is a staple of the series.

In truth, I was worried about this book before I started because I didn’t like the way the last one ended, and I thought we would spend a whole book trying to “find” Alaria or find out if she is truly dead.  I was wrong.  How odd is it to find a fifth series entry to be your favorite?  Obviously, I’ve liked the series enough until now to keep going, but this one had a light, fun feel that really worked for me.

I do hope Markam figures out how to get Deek into other stories.  He is a fun character.  Also, the four people he teams up with to go dungeon diving have interesting personalities and the banter amongst them is enjoyable.  These four are also in another Markam book, Dead Man Gaming, which makes this a fun crossover.

Also, I’m glad that even though in the beginning of this book Ian is still doing stupid things driven by his immaturity and anger, we get a long respite from that for the rest of the book.  I wouldn’t mind seeing the Varkus/Bounty Hunter story come to conclusion sooner than later. It was interesting in the last book and passable in this one, but it’s time to move on.   It Looks like we’re heading underwater for the next entry and I’m looking forward to whatever fun comes Ian’s way.


AudioBook Review – Prophets of Waaagh

Prophets of Waaagh! The story so far

Written by Guy Healy



Narrated by: Tom Alexander, John Banks, Cliff Chapman, Steve Conlin, Matthew Hunt, Jonathan Keeble, David Seddon, Joe Shire

Dis is it boyz! Da Waagh iz ‘ere! Let’s ‘ere it!


I’m not one for audio dramas usually, but oh man. This collection of (very) short stories is such an amazing little treat to have in your library. Let me tell you, I have been looking for a good 40k book from the ‘Orky’ perspective. This is no ‘book’ unfortunately, but the three stories so far add up to an hour of total hilarity and nerdy fanboy love.

There is a tremendous amount of individual talent in the grim dark. Guy Healy is definitely one of the more brighter shining stars among this particular universe of work. His literary prowess has been joined by not one, but several class A orator acts. Several already casted for other 40k books.

The story itself follows the view of a couple different Orks. One of which Bosgaz who finds himself stranded with a grok named Frikk. Along the way they find Talker.

“A soddin’ knows what of ’em talky talky.” (God I love Orks).

The intro to each part of the story even has a quick ‘in total Ork speak’ prologue with a ‘Humee’ translation. Not to mention full on Norwegian-metal-band-leadsinger-lower-lip head-nod theme music peppered through the entirety of all three dramas.

Overall, what an amazing hour I spent listening to these, that I had to come on and write a review for it! Check them out. If you are unfamiliar with any of this information and are totally lost, check out Black Library’s audiobooks which are now sold on audible (after 10 years, damn it).

Follow the link below to check out the first book in the series. These are just a straight buy, I think I paid less than five dollars per twenty minute drama. I hope you enjoyed reading this review.

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live long, and prosper.


AudioBook Review – The undying mercenaries saga

The undying mercenaries saga

By B. V. Larson

Narrated by Mark Boyett


The Undying Mercenaries saga follows the life of James McGill. A young college dropout (due to inability to pay rather than life choice) who is forced to join the world’s largest export service: Galactic Federation Marines. According to B.V. Larson, the world as we know it might someday be visited by aliens who come, not to show us a better way of life; they come to tell us we need to offer up something unique or be destroyed.

The Galactic Federation runs a group called Hegemony which regulates the enterprises of each planet to ensure only one planet is responsible for producing each resource. Earth’s are marines, well mercenaries really. Alien planets hire Earthling mercenaries to arrive and do battle for them against another alien race or as protection, whatever you can think of hiring a mercenary for pretty much.

Earth’s forces are able to provide the galaxy with an unlimited number of troops by using an alien made “birthing chamber” to continually spit out frontline troops. Bored yet? I know, welcome to the world of B
V. Larson. Amazing stories, very long-winded lectures on why they exist.

The first book in the series (Steel World) and the 4th in the series (Machine World) are my personal favorites. In the first book, you meet James McGill, his sidekick Carlos, and his on-again-off-again girlfriend named Natasha. James meets all of them during the Legion Veris boot camp where they are all trained, suited and booted for their first mission….against Dinosaurs!

No joke, space-age, laser beam rifle-wielding battalions of Dinosaur infantry. What a total badass way to start a series. It is then immediately followed by the worst book in the series (Dust World), I suggest you avoid it and jump to book three. You’ll thank me later.

Machine World, or book 4 finds James McGill not only survived the other three. He is on his way to Promotion! (Read that like Neebs, if you don’t know who that is shame on you) Legion Veris is dispatched to a gas giant planet which is systematically covered in ice. The troops are trained on massive mech-warrior style battle rigs that can devastate the enemy on a whole new level. As with anything else from Larson the story only gets better as you go on.

If any of this sounds appealing, do yourself the favor and check out the series. What an amazing story and just enough politics to put you to sleep (if you have any trouble that is).

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As always, live long and prosper.

AudioBook Review – Threadbare: Stuff and Nonsense

Stuff and Nonsense



Written by – Andrew Seiple
Narrated by – Tim Gerard Reynolds

“Too many hours grinding nap and not grinding hunt.”

This quote sums up the majority of the book for me. I am one to dive into a TGR book above mostly anything else. This one, however, was interesting. That’s about it for now.

The story starts inside of a workshop hut for a tailor turned animist. His goal is to take inanimate objects and turn them into sentient golems for a particular pact made with some nefarious creatures. This introduces the main character of Threadbear. Starting life as a magically turned stuffed teddy bear, Threadbear has plenty to deal with. One threat of which deserves immediate attention by him is that of Clawsifer the cat.

This book is very tongue and cheek, well written and about as page-turningly interesting as you can expect a book about a magical stuffed teddy bear to be. That’s not to say it is without its own shining moments. Steiple does a great job of incorporating the stat modifiers and explanations of exactly what ‘1 point in strength’ or ‘2 points more in wisdom’ will do as far as a correlation to real-world views.

The rest of the novel is filled with quirky characters and interesting devices used to push the plot forward. Pro tip: if you’re ever in need of a drink in the wilderness, just soak your teddy bear in water and ring it out. I enjoyed the storytelling and the actual writing of the story. Overall, however, it is a LITRPG book about a stuffed teddy bear. If you’re short on a list of things to read then check this out. Otherwise, there are more adult themed stories that can accomplish the same thing without the need of reliving a twisted Winnie the pooh version of childhood…unless you’re looking for that sort of thing.

Overall score 5/10

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AudioBook Review – Dragon of Ash and Stars

Dragon of Ash and Stars



Written by – Leighton Dickson

Narrated by – John Lee

Dragons! Like, real dragons! Not just characters of someone dressed up as a dragon or having a dragon as a pet. No. This is real-deal Holifield dragons!

Stormfall is a midnight black scaled dragon. In a world where dragons appear to be a summer or autumn. Starfall is a pitch, perpetual black. Often referred to in the book as a ‘Night Dragon’, these colors are highly sought after for a variety of human (called Sticks in the novel) jobs. Beginning his life on a stoney outcropping in the middle of the ocean, Stormfall eventually finds his way to a Sticks settlement after a terrible storm. Hence his name.

The hard life of this dragon follows around the continent as he starts as a fishing drake, then is bought and sold several times to become: a farmer, a gladiator, a carriage puller, and so much more. I really loved this story. It was a fantastic opportunity to see the world perhaps through the eyes of a noble and strong dragon-ling. What really hammered the story home was the incredible voice acting by John Lee. Having been one of my favorite voice actors since I heard him first in Dune. I am always on the lookout for the next ‘Dune quality John Lee book’. Suffice it to say, this one will do for now.

Unfortunately, the story itself is so straightforward that the replayability is low unless you’re like me where you rotate all of your books every week and ‘somehow’ wind up re-reading the same ones over and over. This will be on that list. Perhaps somewhere down at the bottom, however.

Overall 4/10

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AudioBook Review – Bill the Vampire

Bill the Vampire/The Tome of Bill – Audiobook

By – Rick Gualtieri

Narrated by – Christopher John Fetherolf

Holy crap, talk about a wild ride. I half expected Mr. Toad to show up, completely kitted out in a driving outfit to join me for the second half of this book. I loved this story. Long-winded explanations and terrible one-liner jokes aside, this was a very fresh read.

Taking on the role of a big bad vampire, computer programmer Bill is catfished into joining a group of vampires for the evening under the guise of “a wild party in Soho”. For anyone not of the tri-state area (having grown up in cape may county myself) Soho, is such a trashy gentrified neighborhood. Or as Bill would call it “where the hipsters go to die”. That’s a pretty good summary actually.

Bill and his two roommates; Ed and Tom eventually start to find out the limits in both strengths and weaknesses for Bill’s new abilities, which generally lead to a mishap and some crazy pop-culture reference. Just wait until you find out about “acts of faith” that one made me laugh.

The real kicker to this story for both positive and negatives are the narration. At first, it took me a while to get into Fetherolf’s voice. It is distinct, to say the least. Eventually, I just put the book on, went to make a sandwich and came back. During that couple of minutes, the whole thing exploded and clicked for me. What a brilliant narrator. There were a couple word trip-ups and mispronunciation which I’ll dock points for. That’s about it for the negatives, however.

One thing I love about this series is the fact that Gualtieri has decided to chop up books 1-4 then 5-8 as an omnibus. That means you get the whole story for two small payments. With the first collection running over 35 hours and the second over 55 you’re getting your money’s worth. Not to mention that’s almost 100 hours of Seinfeld meets True Blood. Who couldn’t watch 100 episodes of that?

Overall 7/10

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